Oct. 5th, 2009 07:52 pm
raptorcanaria: ([young] wistful)
Going to Japan was an impulsive, hurriedly made plan. It involves moving to another country - a whole other continent with a whole other language. And Dinah's already done stupid things while living away from home in a campus in the same city. It involves leaving a crime ridden Gotham city with only one active protector (two if you include Robin). It's something Dinah planned and decided on herself without any pushing from grownups.

Dinah Snr, of course, disapproves heartily and vociferously.


Alan offers to give Dinah Jnr a ride straight to Okinawa. she turns him down.

Ted (Grant) drives Junior to Gotham airport himself, leaving Dinah sr behind, apparently thinking that if she doesn't say goodbye to her daughter, her daughter will forfeit her flight. Ted drops her off at the door to the checkin, and helps her unload her bags.

"You sure you don't want seeing off, Junior?"

"Thanks, Uncle Ted, but I think I can show a passport and a ticket myself. Don't waste the parking money."

"Alright, your call."

He kisses her on the cheek and hands her a small bag she didn't pack. "This doesn't put you over your allowance, right? Just remember to say you packed it yourself."

Returning the kiss, she eyes him. "If you get me into trouble, Uncle Ted, I'm telling on you."

"Anything you say."



The flight lasts for long enough that she regrets asking Alan for help, and negotiating the Bullet train with nothing but a Japanese phrase book is a bigger challenge than taking on all the gangs in Gotham.

But when she reaches the Dojo, finds her pallet and finally unpacks the bags, it's all worth it. Under the boots and the leather jacket, nesting in a pile of blonde hair, is a note:

Just in case.

- I'm proud of you.

Mom.

(P.S. Ted made me do this. But I'm still proud of you.)

Sep. 7th, 2009 09:09 pm
raptorcanaria: ([young] um...)
10 Things learned by Dinah Laurel Lance in her first semester at Gotham University:

1. College students are able to argue for hours about the finer points of morality, and only ever agree on one thing: it is NEVER immoral or unethical to use fake Ids or just a good bluff in order to drink underage, provided one is a college student.
2. There are 56 different places on the GU campus in which a young vigilante can change into her crimefighting costume without being disturbed.
3. There is no such thing as a 100% reliable hangover cure, despite the insistence of every student alive that there absolutely IS ONE, and they've found it.
4. Once you're at college, your mother never complains about having to do your laundry, as long as you come home to do it. She'll even scrub bloodstains out of leather without asking awkward questions, all of a sudden.
5. No matter how sneaky you think you're being in sneaking in and out of your dorm after lights out every night, roommates will always notice. They're worse than mothers, in that respect.
6. Fortunately, they'll assume you're seeing a male student when you do that, and silently approve, even help by making sure that the path to your bed is clear and learning to sleep with a nightlight on.
7. This makes it easier when you do happen to start seeing a male student.
8. Being a tough, capable, seasoned crime fighting and judo expert is no defence against a charming smile on a rakish older man.
9. Some men like brunettes.
10. One or two things about business studies.



10 Things learned by Dinah Laurel Lance in her second semester at Gotham University.

1. Craig Windrow's favourite colour (blue), his favourite dish (Spaghetti Pomodoro), his favourite position (not disclosed) and a number of other things about Craig Windrow.
2. That the only thing more appealing than a night on the streets beating up muggers is a warm bed with a warm man.
3. Mothers don't often like their teenage daughters dating men over a decade older than them.
4. Just because you don't live at home, it doesn't mean you're not capable of a full blown screaming match with your parent, up to and including the storming out.
5. It's possible to storm out a long way when you and your boyfriend both have motorbikes.
6. It's also possible to make it from Gotham City to Las Vegas by motorcycle in three steamy, passion fueled days.
7. Being a college student doesn't make you smart
8. It's easier and quicker to get a marriage in Nevada than it is to get a divorce in New Jersey.
9. If you never go to a single one of your classes, it's unlikely you'll pass Freshman year and be allowed to stay on for the next year.
10. Sometimes this isn't a bad thing, all told.
raptorcanaria: ([young] putting up with it)
Dinah's room would be fairly sparse, except for a bad habit of hers to leave clothes scattered on the floor: school clothes, sports clothes and fishnets mingle together where she's left them, and it's only the realisation that she can't move faster than Tommy can see that stops her racing to hide the underwear she swears wasn't there when she left.

Other than that; her bed is made,her writing desk is covered in homework, and a Justice Society fan poster older than Dinah herself is pinned above the bed. Photos of her uncles out of costume cover the pinboard above her desk, and the only framed photograph an early one of her parents; her mother in costume and her Dad obviously pleased to be on the arm of the Black Canary.

"And this is my room," Dinah says quietly, shutting her closet door behind her and Tommy. "Can you race out without my Mom catching you?"

Aug. 14th, 2008 12:21 pm
raptorcanaria: ([young] scream)
She changes into civvies in the alley behind her school and catches a late bus back home, all the time grinning like a crazy thing. It isn't that she needs approval or anything, and certainly not from a new cape who isn't even J.S.A. recognised, but it's nice to have it anyway: finally someone's found out what she's doing and hasn't told her to stop. He respects her, even trusts her, and has definitely acknowledged her competence. She isn't going to mess this up. She's finally made it and the Black Canary's going to be the greatest superheroine in the world again.

She's practically humming as she silently turned her key in the front door and slipped inside. It's late - it always is - but her mother would be...

"Dinah!"

Dinah sr is standing in the living room, hands clenched in fury and behind her sits Ted, guilt and worry all over his face.

Oh crap.

Dinah's eyes slip to the side table by Ted, where the ledger she stole from his office sits like Courtroom Exhibit A.

Ted himself looks awkward, as if he's regretting what's just about to happen. "If you need to know something, Junior, you ask me." He's able to say this because Dinah's mother is almost speechless, shaking with fury. She marches across the room towards her, and grabs the strap of her sports bag.

"Mom..." Dinah tries to feign innocent indignation, but she's never been good at lying, and Dinah sr has already ripped the bag open, spilling the wig onto the ground.

"I can't believe it!" her Mom screams. "You disobey me, use an old friend against me..."

"He's my friend, too!" Dinah's temper rises in the face of parental anger. "And he's only helping me like Grandad did you!"

"I told you the rules were different then!"

"The rules are the same!" And even if they weren't, Dinah's got the bug now, she won't stop. She can't. "Uncle Ted told me about..." He's sitting right there, but Dinah has too much momentum to stop herself now. "...about Jake. It's always been dangerous!"

"You betrayed my trust!"

"Trust? You never trusted me to do anything!"

(Uncle Ted, Dinah notices, stood up when his name was mentioned, trying to act as mediator. "Stop it! Would you two...")

It's so unfair. Her Mom's always tried to holdher back, to stop her from doing the only possible thing she can do, from...

SO UNFAIR. She's never been this angry before. Never had the need to scream, even when her Dad died. It's like a storm inside her.

"You can take your trust and go. To

"HHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLL

Which is an appropriate word for what happens next.

Aug. 14th, 2008 11:20 am
raptorcanaria: ([young blonde] bombshell)
"You don't scare us."

Dinah knows he's lying - not because of his body language, the catch in his voice, or the expression on his face, but because she knows she was scared when he first showed up, and she's good.

These guys, however, aren't backing down, and they don't really have any reason to think they needed to. Nearly a dozen of them, all armed - Dinah counts three guns, some heavy duty chains, a number of blunt metal instruments - and all with the stance and poise of experienced fighters. Dinah would think twice about taking on a gang like that.

She'd do it anyway, but she'd think twice.

She certainly has no intention of letting him take them all on without help, but at first it doesn't look like he needs it. The first two guns to be drawn are removed with the slightest movement. The first thrown swings are blocked and men start falling quickly.

But he makes one mistake so basic, so stupid and so dangerous that Dinah immediately wants to hit him for it. He seems to forget the third gunman, and then leaves his left side open. From where Dinah's hiding behind the criminal, she can see that there's a perfectly good, and fatal, shot right at the Bat.

She launches herself out from the trashcans she's been sheltering behind. With one twist of her arm she's disabled him and another strike brings him down, before he even realises he had the shot.

With two expert fighters in the fray, the rest of the fight was over in a matter of seconds. It's strange fighting alongside someone - unlike Gordon, he fights similarly to her - and it feels slightly awkward, but she puts that down to him, not her.

"You left your flank open. He could've killed you."

"I knew you had me covered."

So he knew she was following him. Big deal, she tells herself. She's new at this and he's really good. It's not nearly as important as the fact that he trusted her skills and prowess, and finally seems to have unclenched enough to accept her working in the same city.

"So you're not going to rat me out to my Mom?"

"No."

It's a huge weight lifted off her shoulders, as she realises she doesn't have to play her trump card.

"Thanks, Bruce." She can't help herself: what's the point of holding an Ace if no one sees it?

His expression was unreadable. But she imagines she sees a very tiny hint of a possible maybe smile. And she decides it's approval.

Aug. 13th, 2008 09:38 am
raptorcanaria: ([young blonde] bombshell)
"What do you think you're doing?"

She's been tracing them for days: shadowing both in and out of costume, breaking into her Dad's now-empty office, rifling through her Mom's notes, She planned this, knew how it was going to go down, had a system, wanted to grill that one for more information after taking down all his buddies. She knew what she was doing.

Then the stupid stupid Bat showed up, gave them one look, and they spilled everything and ran away.

"I think I'm saving you a fight," he says, watching them run. Dinah scowls and forces her hand down from an itch on her scalp. She's been staking out this hideout for hours, and is sweating like crazy under her wig.

"I could have taken them," Dinah objects.

"I know." he turns and faced her, showing a face almost entirely covered by a cowl, not even the eyes showing under white lensed panels. "You're an outstanding hand-to-hand combatant. I've been watching you."

"Watching me?" She feels fists forming at her hips. Watching her? Watching her? "I'm not a criminal."

"But I had to be sure about that," he said, his voice as ever infuriatingly steady. "Just as I had to be sure that your methods weren't going to cause me trouble or get in my way. Your mother's friends taught you well, Dinah."

The punch hits home again, but this time Dinah's on the same level at him, staring him straight in the face, having just been denied the satisfaction of a good fight. She wants to scream at him- and right now, she could scream loud enough to throw him against a wall - but instead she throws a punch.

Which he blocks.

He blocks.

And in the same instant, punches her back.

She's so shocked she doesn't even blink until after he's swept away.

Aug. 4th, 2008 11:13 am
raptorcanaria: (Default)
"This is my town."

It's a voice designed to instill fear into the heart of man. To make it clear that the speaker tolerates no argument; that he expects to be obeyed - no scratch that: it's a voice designed to force abeyance, with expectations not actually a factor in the equation.

It needs work.

Dinah looks up from where she was binding the wrists and ankles of the gang of armed muggers she's just taken down with her bare hands. Above her, on the railing of a fire escape, crouches a human figure shrouded in black and shadow. She can't make out a face, and even the shape is hard to make out, thanks to a long cape that hangs down from the sillouhette. It is scary, at first. She's heard the stories; it's hard not to, everyone's talking about it. Not just the Justice Society, not just her Dad's cop friends, but customers in the flower store, and the papers. And - people in the bar. He's the reason Gotham's famous even there.

Her fingers stumble in the knot-work, but she sets her jaw and finishes. She's the Black Canary now, and shes not going to let herself be intimidated like some dumb teenager being caught doing something she shouldn't.

She is a dumb teenager, and she has been caught doing something she shouldn't, but she'll be blowed if she's going to let herself be intimidated by anyone outside the Justice Society.

She stands up, her hands on her hips. She's since put away her Mom's outfit and replaced it with one of her own, with help form the Bar in supplying the raw materials. It is, in fact the exact same costume, but this one fits, and she can put her hands on her hips and adopt a confident stance, without fear that her impractical neckline will let her down.

"It's not just your town," she insists, and with satisfied relief, decides that she can't detect any nervousness in her own voice. "Other people live here too."

"You're in the way," the man  - Batman - says. "I don't need an amateur ruining my work."

"Excuse me?" Dinah returns, irritated. "Amateur? The Black Canary was cleaning up the streets of Gotham before you were even born!" OK, that's a guess, but it's probably true, unless he's really old or something.

"But have you been?" the figure straightens, his cape billowing out behind him in an unnecessary show of dramatics. (Which Dinah, against her better nature, thinks really cool.) "Does your mother know you're out after dark, Miss Lance?"

It's like a punch to the stomach.

Not the threat, nor the information, but the unbelievable breach of superhero etiquette.

"Not while we're in costume!" Dinah snaps at him. But he's already disappeared into the rooftops above.

Jul. 29th, 2008 09:37 am
raptorcanaria: ([young blonde] bombshell)
It's a simple plan. She finds the bar just before the polls open, and follows the crowd of nearly a hundred street people to the polling station, just needing to catch them in the act.

She never gets the chance.

Just as they're approaching the station, an home homeless woman starts wailing, out of control.

"My eyes!" she screams, "my eyes! I can't see!"

Mo, Dinah's target, is conveniently near the distraught blinded woman, and clamps a gloved hand over her mouth before she can say anything else. He cringes away when the bearded man snaps at him, "what the hell did you pour down her throat?"

Mo has no words, and Beardie turns away in disgust, fielding the rest of his poll fixing flock down the street. "C'mon fellas, we don't want to be late."

Dinah doesn't follow. She can't. Still in the shadows of an alley, in the trash and the dirt, she stares, transfixed, as Mo closes his other hand over the old woman's nose and forces her down.

Paralysed with horror, Dinah watches him murder a blind old lady.

It's only when he drops the body to the floor like a lump of meat and strides away that she finds herself able to move. Not after him, but to the old lady. Fishnets tear as her knees scrape the road, and she gathers the woman into her arms, but already much to late. Eyes clouded with tears, Dinah holds her head back and wails silently.

By the time despair gives way to anger and determination; and she gets to her feet to chase Mo, he's already out of sight.

"No..."






The old woman murdered by Mo wasn't the only victim of the moonshine. As evening approaches and she starts hunting down her quarry, Dinah begins to discover more bodies. Three in the space of a few hours; faces distorted in pain, hands cold against stomachs or mouths, one in a pool of his own vomit. Each time, she finds the body too late to save them, and the even more people she finds looking sick and scared, are too scared to tell the woman in the costume what might be wrong.

The night is a failure, and Dinah just gets angrier and angrier. It doesn't occur to her to go to school the next day. She'll just have to ask around, and starts around the bars in the neighbourhood of the poll in question. It's not until the sun starts setting that she discovers a successful tactic.

Before Dinah can even start asking questions, as soon as she sits at the bar, the bartender passes her a glass of some brown sticky liquid.

"Uh, I don't drink."

"It's caramel water, sister." He's gruff, but friendly, giving Dinah a sort of patronising look. "None of the girls drink when they're walking. You are working, aren't you?"

He thinks she's a prostitute. Clearly it must be the fishnets - Dinah wonders for a second why her Mom never mentioned this, but she decides to go with the line. "Sure - but right now I'm mostly looking for Mo. He owes me, you know - for yesterday."

"Oh yeah," the barman says with a wry smirk. "I heard he was paying the local girls to take the aftrenoon off and vote. How much you squeeze him for?"

Dinah twitches her mouth sideways to give a look she hopes is naive hope. "$10?"

"I love to see Mo pinched but you sold yourself cheap, kid. You can find him holed up in the Wayfarers. And then get your butt back to school."

She wishes all bartenders were as cool as Justin. But this guy's rough concern makes her smile anyway as she slips out and heads towards the Wayfarers - a run down hotel a few blocks down. She gives the same 'working girl chasing payment' story to a half-interested receptionist, and sneaks her way up to the only occupied room in the place. There, Dinah crouches at the door and peers in the keyhole, to where her Mr. Beard is busy taking his frustration out on Mo. And the walls of the room.

"What was in those bottles, Mo? What was in those bottles?"

"But - but - you tol' me not to waste any more money, or - or - "

"Moonshine. You bought rotgut street liquor. You got any idea what the Roman's gonna do t'us if this turns into an election scandal? Do ya? It's not about some cheez precinct, Mo. It's a damn Empire we're messing with."

Mo takes the beating badly, and ends up cowering on the floor. "I can fix it, Larry. Honest to god. I can fix... fix..."

"You'd better." Larry pulls Mo up by his lapels, Outside, Dinah guesses what will happen and scurries away, hiding around a corner in the corridor. Just as she gets around there, the door is opened by Mo flying through it, surrounded by old bottles.

"'Cause what they'll do to us will make death look pretty!" Larry shouts from inside as the door slams back. as Dinah watches, Mo gathers up the bottles and runs out of the hotel.

Bottles.

Moonshine.

Oh god, he's going to kill them all.

Dinah gives him a head start to avoid Larry's notice, then follows, sliding down the banister and leaping into the street past the astonished receptionist.

"Hey!" she screams, "MO!"

He jumps, shattering the bottles in his hands, and looks back in fear before he starts running away.

It was stupid, shouting, but no more stupid than trying to run in these heels, what was her Mom thinking? Dinah sprints after him, following him out into the crowded main street.

"You're not getting away from me, you murderer!"

People turn to star at her, but they don't get out of her way, and he's already on the bus.

"I" Dinah puts on another spurt on speed and reaches out with her Mom's leather gloves towards the back of the bus.

"Won't." She's going to make it..

"Let..." aaagh!

Getting hit by a car behind her wasn't part of the plan. She's thrown back against the hood, and has to whip her legs up to prevent them being crushed to shatters against the bus.

"YOU!" As she rolls back, she recognises Larry at the wheel. Apparently he came to the resuce of his colleague, but Dinah really won't let him. She continues to roll, straightening out her feet to send her heels straight through the windshield, and into his face.

So that's why her Mom wore these ridiculous heels. She follows through and tires not to think of the grossness of sitting in the unconscious guy's lap as she drops down to reach for the brake. She fails, and the car slams into the back of the slowing bus, which she guesses is for the best.

One down.

Out of the car, Dinah leaps onto the roof of the bus as people crowd out in a panic. Among them is Mo, but instead of milling around the crash site, he tires to run away.

Dinah leaps after him

Her heel slams into his back and he falls to the floor, but still has enough fight in him to turn and punch his assailant in the stomach. He kicks her, and knocks the wind out for a second. Dinah responds to that by kicking him hard in the chin, and punching his face with enough force to knock him to the ground unconscious.

"I told you you wouldn't get away with this."

She stays until the police arrive, and arrest Mo and Larry on the witness statement from the Black Canary. she poses for a picture with one of the officers who apparently has always been a fan. They take the men away.

Within the week, Larry and Mo will receive visitors and later be found dead in their cells.

Someone got away with it.

Jul. 28th, 2008 07:45 am
raptorcanaria: ([young] suiting up)
It's an election year in Gotham City. Dinah can't vote, and none of her peers seem to care much about the election at all. Dinah is not like other fifteen year olds.

Her mother's made a few dark remarks about how Gotham's not what it used to be, and Ted mentioned something about the Roman when someone at the gym queried him about his voting choice. All of Dinah's current opinion came from her Dad.

Her late father.

She tries to ignore the posters around her as she waits for her bus home from Ted's. Seeing Garcia's smarmy face smiling at her from all directions makes her twitch in annoyance. If he gets in, her Dad had said, then Falcone would have not only Commissioner Loeb in his pocket, but the Mayor too, and Gotham really would become a mob town. Things had been bad enough to make her Dad quit the force before she was born, and they're only getting worse.

So she focuses away from the posters, and bides her time listening to the conversations around her.

"...find bodies for. Luckily, only three of them are female."

Immediately, her attention is fully caught.

"Awww nuts. Three dames? Where we gonna find three more dames to vote in tomorrow's primary? We already paid ten bucks a head for every workin' girl between Diversey and 42nd street."

"Now, boys, you know the routine. Each team delivers seventy-five votes or you'll be dropped from the pay roll. This city can't afford any dead weight. 'Cause if our guy loses, we're all out of jobs."

Poll fixing, she realises suddenly. These guys are involved in poll fixing, and presumably for Garcia. As they move past the unassuming teenager on the bench, none of them look around to notice her slipping off and trailing them, right to one of the localised hubs of his campaign. Still playing on her invisibility as a nobody teenager, Dinah finds a table inside and pretends to work, all the time listening to one of the men she trailed talking to a larger black bearded man.

"You got the voter registrations?"

"Yeah."

"All right. You get us a room in a flop and plenty of booze. And I'll hit the missions. And Mo - don't spend any more of my money than you have to. This stupid thing is bustin' me."

She doesn't see how much money trades hands, but when Beardy leaves, she can hear her guy mutter,

"Yeah, yeah. Ya cheapskate."

He leaves, she follows, amazed at how easy it is, to a deserted bar. There, she can't pretend she's meant to be there, and listens at the door.

"It's Monday," the barman mutters, no even looking up. "We're closed on Mondays."

"Your back room isn't," Dinah's target replies. "I need a favour, Sanders."

"You're outa favours, Mo. Come around when you've paid a few back. "

"M-m-hmm." He doesn't appear to be in anyway hampered by this. "And you probably wouldn't consider it so much a favour that you can have your Monday crapshoots without interference."

"You can't trade on that forever, Mo."

"Yeah, but I won't be trading at all if we lose the election. A friend's eye is a blind eye, if you know what I mean."

The barman says nothing more until he's retrieved a large crate and heaved it onto the bar.

"This stuff's been in the cellar since my brother was born, maybe before. Take it, mix it with the other and they'll never know the difference."

Whatever 'that stuff' is, Dinah doesn't think she's going to like it. At a sound behind her, she escapes into a dead end alley and watches as various homeless people start to turn up. 'Mo' directs them down to a cellar.

Dinah doesn't need to see more. She can guess what'll happen; they'll keep the crowd happily drunk then march them down to the polling stations tomorrow.

Unless somebody stops them.




There is no Black Canary operating in Gotham City any more: Dinah's Mom has started returning to work in the florist's, but she's kept off her street and the wig has been put away with a permanent air. She certainly isn't going to be around to stop the poll-fixing.

She's working in the store when Dinah gets home, so there's no one stopping the daughter from sneaking into the master bedroom and pulling out a cardboard box from the false back in the closet - the unmarked one containing fishnets and synthetic hair.

She ponders the bar for a second, but for this, she needs her privacy. So in the middle of the unholy mess of school books that is her bedroom, she tries on the outfit.

It's a terrible fit. Terrible.

A thin line of duct tape acts as a makeshift stocking seam, and a well placed safety pin makes up for other... assets that her mother has in more abundance. She need two pairs of socks to stop the boots rubbing. Even when it fits, it looks kind of bad, actually, Dinah has to admit. Nothing more pathetic than a little girl dressing up in Mommy's clothes.

But then there's the wig. She gathers up her own black hair and scoops it into the wig, in a way she's watched her Mom do a thousand times. She lifts her head, shaking long blonde curls over her shoulder and looks at herself in the mirror. Then she stands up even straighter, and smiles confidently at her reflection.

The Black Canary smiles back.

Jul. 14th, 2008 02:26 pm
raptorcanaria: (intense)
There aren't many people Dinah recognises at her father's funeral; the rest of the family died a long time ago and most of the Society took serious the widow's request that they not attend - for fear of any association in light of the way Larry died. Two of Dinah's uncles ignored these wishes; Johnny sits with her mother, and Ted Grant sits on her own other side, his strong arm curled around her shoulders for most of the service.

It's short, and controlled, and some of what's said is vague. Dinah's mother tries to say something but it's lost in tears. Dinah herself thought she'd want to sing, but she backs out at the last minute. A stream of clients and ex-colleagues from the GCPD say platitudes but don't give any indication that they actually knew the man who gave his life for the woman he loved.

Squirming in her chair, Dinah spies a young girl sitting with the group of cops who turned up. Demure in a pretty black dress, she's sitting by a man with a huge moustache who Dinah takes to be her dad.

Their eyes meet briefly and the girl offers a tiny, sympathetic smile. In that moment, Dinah hates her more than anything.

Don't smile at me. You still have your dad and you have no idea how much this hurts.

She leans away from Ted and wraps an arm around her mother's waist.

Jul. 13th, 2008 11:55 pm
raptorcanaria: ([young] worried)
Dinah remembers when Uncle Jay went away: when they finally told her that he wasn't coming back. She'd been sad then. She thought for a while that they'd been being needlessly patronising to her; that Uncle Jay had died and they'd been trying to ease the news. As it slowly occurred to her that he was, in fact simply missing, it hadn't become any easier. He was missing, but no one had any idea if he'd ever return; as far as it mattered, he might as well have died.

She never cried. She just lost the energy for Judo and boxing and for the flowers and spent more and more time in her room, drawn in on herself. It had taken time to recover, but she never cried.

Sometimes now, she finds her vision swimming and tears splash down her face, hot and painful where the salt reacts with her skin, but it doesn't feel like crying ought to feel. The tears are distant, detached from her, as if they're being produced by someone else and she's just observing. She doesn't feel like crying: she doesn't feel like anything. It's always a surprise to find herself weeping, but then, sometimes it's a surprise to find herself breathing. Just like with Jay, it's like the entire world has lost everything that makes it interesting, and the air has been sucked out of the room.






She doesn't go back to the bar. There's too much to do - well, too much for her mother to do. Dinah instead becomes the maker of lots and lots of coffees, the opener of lots and lots of cards and the receiver of lots and lots of bouquets ordered with other florists.

("Great," her mother says, voice hoarse for reasons not quite to do with her years smoking, "they express their sympathies by putting us out of business.")

There's always someone in the house as well. One of the Society - usually Uncle Johnny - is there to talk to her Mom in hushed tones, to hug either of them, and... just to be there. With all the people that Dinah's never heard of calling and sending things, she feels the comforting presence of an uncle as a constant source of security, the one rock she can cling to in this storm of badness that always seems about to drown her. But always, it feels like they're there for her Mom more than her.

She's not sure she recognises her Mom. Dinah Drake Lance was always so confident and assured, always confident. Now she suddenly looks old and unwell: sleeping far too late, moving with none of the grace and composure Dinah had come to expect from the world class Judo expert. The morning before the funeral, she drops a cupful of coffee on the kitchen floor. Never could either of them be called clumsy, and breakages just don't happen. Dinah jr jumps, Dinah Sr screams and covers her mouth.

"Oh for God's sake, Mom!" Dinah snaps, "I just mopped that floor!"

"I'm sorry," her Mom replies, staring at the floor in shock. "I didn't... I'm sorry."

Dinah glares at her and crouches down with paper towel in hand. It's a Mickey Mouse mug - a souvenir from Disneyland when Dinah was eight, just the three of them; a normal family.

"It's OK, Mom," she says reluctantly, because nothing's OK and they know it. "It's just coffee."

"But it's your favourite mug.." Dinah has never seen her mother so upset before, and it scares her more than she's ever been scared by a theoretical supervillain threat.

"It's not," Dinah returns, trashing the mug. "It hasn't been my favourite mug for years, Mom."

"I didn't..." her Mom manages. "I didn't know that..." And then, without warning, the Black Canary is crying in her own kitchen. "I'm sorry."

Dinah stops short, then rushes forward, hands around her Mom's shoulders. "Mom," she says quietly, and can't find any other words. For a while, there's no need for them, and mother clings to daughter like she never has before, completely helpless for the first time Dinah can remember.

"I'm going to leave the Justice Society," she says quietly, and it's no surprise.

"OK," Dinah says, her arms still around her Mom. "Take all the time you need."

"No." Her Mom pulls back in the chair, holding her daughter's shoulders at arm's length. "Forever. I'm not going to make you an orphan, Dinah, I promise."

"But the Justice Society is your life..."

"You're my life, Darling. You and your father were always the most important thing, and now I've lost him..." There's another wave of tears and all Dinah can do is hold her, shocked into silence.

When her tears come back, they're not for the loss of her dead parent.

Jul. 11th, 2008 07:34 am
raptorcanaria: ([young] worried)
Something weird but not too weird happens with time when Dinah's in Milliways. It doesn't stop, but it might well do. She's beginning to suspect that maybe there's some greater force at work about the timing that means she can spend hours at the bar at a time without her parents ever worrying about why she's spending so much time alone in her room.

Not that they ever have.

Dinah. Is not. Resentful.

She shuts the closet door just as there's a the faint sound of magic downstairs and she hears voices: a few voices, but the first one she really recognises is Carter. So instead of staying up in her room and reading, Junior puts on her standard I-love-my-uncles smile and bounces down to see them.

"If I'd know you were all coming back I'd've put the coffee on," she says cheerfully when she's halfway down. It's easy to be mad at her mother for perceived neglect, but all that is thrown out for her uncles.

"Hi, Junior," Ted - Wildcat- says, as his large arms enfold around her. But it's not a hug of I'm-glad-to-see-my-niece. It's tight, possessive, and at the same time ridiculously gentle for a large man who knows exactly what his student can take. Dinah pulls back out of the hug and peers up into his face. For a fleeting moment, she sees a fond but sad smile, and then it's gone, and all that remains is sadness.

"What's wro..."

She turns around. They're all there: Carter, Alan, Wesley, Rex, Kent, Charles, even the other Ted, who doesn't come over often. Johnny has his arm around her mother's shoulders, and her head is turned away and down, the wig obscuring her face. All in costume, all the men with their masks off. And all (except Charles) looking at Dinah Jr with the same mixed expression: regret, sadness, and above all of that, pity. Pity for her.

Dinah actually physically feels the warmth drain out of her body.

"Where's Daddy?"

Jul. 10th, 2008 08:05 pm
raptorcanaria: ([young] blegh)
Dinah's after-school routine isn't so much a routine of things done, as seeing if things can or need to be done. Item one on the list is to check if her Mom's in the shop. If she isn't, then that usually means that she's out on an emergency and Dinah herself has to let the assistant go, cover the shop for two hours and close up herself. This is what happens today.

When she finally makes it home, the answerphone light is flashing. It's her Dad; her mother never has bothered to let people know where she was. Only the JSA need to know, and they have ways to find her that are better than answerphones.

Not that Dinah's resentful.

"Hi, sweetie. Your Mom and I were at Uncle Ted's observatory when something came up. You'll have to get your own dinner tonight: there's lasagna in the fridge. Finish your homework and don't stay up too late. Love you."

He's tagged along before, and he'll do it again, it's no big deal: just that she's alone in the house again. The lasagna is right where he said it would be; all she has to do is heat it up.

She burns it.
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...or, IB tries to make sense of comic continuity

Dinah's age:
According to the 1993 Black Canary Miniseries, Dinah was 15 years old when she first donned the wig and fishnets.  In Justice League Year One (1998), Dinah's stated as being 19. However, Secret Origins #46 says Dinah was new to the crimefighting world when the JLA formed. The older Dinah is when she founds the JLA, the less time I have to fit her JLA years, Seattle and the aftermath thereof, so I'm inclined to keep the younger age and go through JLA: Year One when I judge the character ready; either by skipping years in game or by saying she's younger.

The Sensei & Student storyline in Birds of Prey says that 19-year-old Dinah spent a year in Japan studying under Sensei Otomo, but doesn't mention if it's pre-or post JLA. I'll deal with this when I get to it, playing it out when I decide Dinah needs a one-year break from the bar.

Larry Lance
Dinah's father is alive in the1993 series, and Secret Origins #50 also has him alive to find out his daughter is heroing (and discovers her meta status). However, the 2007 miniseries implies that he's dead and his death is one of the reasons Dinah Sr doesn't want her daughter fighting. The problem is  - much as I as a mun would want Larry alive to be proud of his daughter, this makes a lot of sense and simplifies the JSA/BC 1's apparent on-again-off-again status.

The fight with Aquarius and Larry's death, therefore will be one of the first 'canon events' that Dinah goes through. I should therefore really read up on my JSA post-crisis history, tortuous as it seems to be. I see no real reason why the JSA can't reform breifly for that one massive threat and re-disband (BC1 returing permanently) afterwards.

The Canary Cry
In the 1993 flashbacks, Dinah had her canary cry before she started heroing, but more for dramatic reasons (comparing it to the 'current' BC2, who in 1993 no longer had her cry) than plot reasons. It was used in training but not in the field. Secret Origins #50 had the power manifesting when Dinah's parents (both alive) first find out about her little heroic rebellion. I much prefer this to any implication that she 'always had it', as it gives the adolescent the first ever thing that's uniquely hers at a time when she rather needs it.

Location
JLA: Year One also says Dinah was living in Star City with her Mom. I'm pretty sure this is false - her parents were both Gothamites, and Junior often references Gotham as her home. She left to live in Star City when she fell in love with Ollie (presumably after a row with Dinah sr).

First Marriage
LOLWHUT. Yeah, I have no idea when she even finds time to get to college, let alone get all married.

In Conclusion: A Time Line:
- Entry to Bar
- Aquarius / Larry's death
- Black Canary (1993) ballot fixing/murder spree. Dinah's first outing.
- TBC time of secret crimefighting.
[At this point I'd like her to meet Batman (pre-Robin)]
- Dinah Snr discovers her secret
- Manifestation of Canary Cry
- Dinah breaks a knuckle on Ted's jaw, learns new punch.
- Short time of Dinah Sr reconciling her worries.

- Sensei Otomo in Okinawa for one year.
- Secret Origins #46/ JLA Year One
- College, meeting & marrying Criag Windrow
- Others join the JLA, incl. Green Arrow
- The Cat and the Canary (JLU)
- Mayhem of the Music Meister (B:B&tB)
- Various adaptations of Silver Age shenanigans.
- Identity Crisis flashback
- Batgirl Year One
- Leaving Gotham for Star City
- Star City shenanigans including Snow Birds don't Fly
- The Crisis
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